Children's educaton is expensive. In some countries the government pays some of or all of the costs. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

Many people argue that nowadays, the
government
have paid full or partial fees at
school
for kids. Personally,
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I
completely agree with
such
a policy has many positive
results but
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results, but
also
comes with some drawbacks
on
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to
education
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educational
development. It is evident that there have been various benefits
from
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of
payment
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pay
paying
for kid's
education
.
First
, the
school
due to
funded
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funding
by the
government
can ease the burden on difficult families concerning about
education
cost. In fact
,
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,
in poor countryside
,
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,
they need
this
support will encourage more children to go to
school
.
Second
, by supporting the tuition that leads to their parents can have more money to spend on food
,
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,
care for them and they go to
school
becomes better.
This
means that illiteracy rate will be reduced and it may significantly contribute to the development of the nation. It is evident that there still some disadvantages with regards to
government
support for
education
.
First
, in order to share the financial burden, the
government
will affect the entire national budget.
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,
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,
healthcare services and other sectors of
economy
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the economy
would not be
give
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given
adequate attention.
Second
,
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,
if students go to
school
for free, they may prevent them from trying their best to learn and waste that
government
investment. In conclusion, the advantages of
government
financial support for
education
are more significant than the possible disadvantages.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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