Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. To what extent do you agree with this view.

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In today’s competitive world, companies are adopted so may strategies for their better profit and that’s why they adopted many advertising in different ways. Apart from that

tradition

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traditionally

use now companies use Television

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Radio and most of the common way is internet for advertising.I tend to agree that some method of advertising adopted by companies

are

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unethical and unacceptable. In the beginning

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we can say that some methods of advertising are

influence

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influencing

the people to buy unnecessary things.The main effect of advertising is on children.Children attract about various things which they see in advertising and they force their parents to buy for

themself

reflexive form of "them"

themselves

Moreover

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companies hire some celebrity for advertising.Because of that, indigenous people attract towards that thing.Some of advertising influence bad

habbit

an established custom

habit

habits

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society while they waste their money on

bad product

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a bad product

bad products

In addition

, some advertisings are

to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits

too

two

unethical like smoking and alcohol advertising.That type of advertising banned in some countries.

This

type of advertising

put

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puts

bad effect

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a bad effect

on society while people tend to buy

this things

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these things

this thing

without think their own health.

Furthermore

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consuming that unethical product may cause to physical problem.

On the other hand

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apart from that

unaccepatable

not adequate to give satisfaction

unacceptable

things

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thing

there are so many things which

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are

ethical.Some

products

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product

advertising

are

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necessary for people to know what they are buying.Advertising

also

describe the quality of things.In my perspective, we have to understand what we are consuming.Because some product

are

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detrimental

for

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ourselves.So in my opinion

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we can only know that things because of advertising.Having said that, advertising

also create

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also creates

employement

the state of being employed or having a job

employment

. To sum up

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some unethical and unacceptable advertising

create

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creates

negative effect

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a negative effect

on people and kids.In my way,

this

type of advertising should be banned by

Goverment

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the Government

Government

Sun Apr 05 2020

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Topic Vocabulary:

Unethical
Unacceptable
Deceptive
Exaggerated
Misleading
Manipulation
Vulnerable
Targeted advertising
Perpetuation
Societal norms
Stereotypes
Negative body image
Intrusion of privacy
Data-driven
Over-saturation
Desensitization
Annoyance
Greenwashing
Eco-conscious

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