Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. To what extent do you agree with this view.

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In today’s competitive world, companies are adopted so may strategies for their better profit and that’s why they adopted many advertising in different ways. Apart from that

tradition

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traditionally

use now companies use Television

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Radio and most of the common way is internet for advertising.I tend to agree that some method of advertising adopted by companies

are

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unethical and unacceptable. In the beginning

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we can say that some methods of advertising are

influence

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influencing

the people to buy unnecessary things.The main effect of advertising is on children.Children attract about various things which they see in advertising and they force their parents to buy for

themself

reflexive form of "them"

themselves

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companies hire some celebrity for advertising.Because of that, indigenous people attract towards that thing.Some of advertising influence bad

habbit

an established custom

habit

habits

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society while they waste their money on

bad product

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a bad product

bad products

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, some advertisings are

to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits

too

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unethical like smoking and alcohol advertising.That type of advertising banned in some countries.

This

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type of advertising

put

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puts

bad effect

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a bad effect

on society while people tend to buy

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this things

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these things

this thing

without think their own health.

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consuming that unethical product may cause to physical problem.

On the other hand

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apart from that

unaccepatable

not adequate to give satisfaction

unacceptable

things

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thing

there are so many things which

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are

ethical.Some

products

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product

advertising

are

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necessary for people to know what they are buying.Advertising

also

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describe the quality of things.In my perspective, we have to understand what we are consuming.Because some product

are

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detrimental

for

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ourselves.So in my opinion

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we can only know that things because of advertising.Having said that, advertising

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also create

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also creates

employement

the state of being employed or having a job

employment

. To sum up

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some unethical and unacceptable advertising

create

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creates

negative effect

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a negative effect

on people and kids.In my way,

this

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type of advertising should be banned by

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the Government

Government

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

268 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Unethical
Unacceptable
Deceptive
Exaggerated
Misleading
Manipulation
Vulnerable
Targeted advertising
Perpetuation
Societal norms
Stereotypes
Negative body image
Intrusion of privacy
Data-driven
Over-saturation
Desensitization
Annoyance
Greenwashing
Eco-conscious

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Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today’s society. To what extent do you agree with this view.

Fully explain your ideas

Nowadays, some people are changing their way of look through hair colour, cosmetics and even plastic surgerie. What are the reasons? Is it a good thing?

Some people say that it is. A waste of time to learn literature such as a novel and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some societies, more and more people are deciding to live alone. Why do you think this is? Do the advantages of living alone outweigh the disadvantages?

Despite huge improvements in healthcare, the overall standard of physical health in many developed countries is now falling. What could be the reason for this trend, and what can be dome to reverse it?

What do you think is the best way to find a job: by gaining more knowledge and education or through more practical skills? Explain your choice, using specific reasons and details.