You recently went to see a good play at a theatre, but you did not enjoy it because of some problems in the theatre. Write a letter to the manager of the theatre. In your letter: •say which play you saw and when •describe the problems you experienced in the theatre •suggest what the manager should do

Dear Sir or Madam, As an avid fan of theatre, I have seen the ‘Soqrat’ piece, which was performed for

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time, at your place on the 15th of April. The play was cancelled two times

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its actor’s sickness and

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I had the chance to buy the tickets. Unfortunately, when I got to your place in order to watch my favourite piece, I found out my seat had been sold to another person because of a double-booking error on your site.

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the hall manager directed me to the VIP seat, I was not satisfied with my place because the scene lightning was bliding and distracting me the whole time and the seat was not comfortable at all. I would suggest that you not only should change your hall’s seats but

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you ought to modernise your lighting system.

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, the theatre’s site needs to be upgraded by professionals to prevent double-booking errors in the future. Yours faithfully, Negar Sedigh