You recently went to see a good play at a theatre, but you did not enjoy it because of some problems in the theatre. Write a letter to the manager of the theatre. In your letter: •say which play you saw and when •describe the problems you experienced in the theatre •suggest what the manager should do

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Dear Sir or Madam, As an avid fan of theatre, I have seen the ‘Soqrat’ piece, which was performed for

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time, at your place on the 15th of April. The play was cancelled two times

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its actor’s sickness and

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I had the chance to buy the tickets. Unfortunately, when I got to your place in order to watch my favourite piece, I found out my seat had been sold to another person because of a double-booking error on your site.

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the hall manager directed me to the VIP seat, I was not satisfied with my place because the scene lightning was bliding and distracting me the whole time and the seat was not comfortable at all. I would suggest that you not only should change your hall’s seats but

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you ought to modernise your lighting system.

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, the theatre’s site needs to be upgraded by professionals to prevent double-booking errors in the future. Yours faithfully, Negar Sedigh

Submitted by Negar_seddigh on Sat May 18 2024

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coherence cohesion

Ensure each paragraph contains a clear and distinct idea to enhance readability and coherence.

task achievement

Proofread your letter to catch small errors (e.g., 'scene lightning' should be 'stage lighting').

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The letter has a respectful and suitable tone throughout, addressing the manager in a courteous manner.

coherence cohesion

The closing is properly formatted, including a sign-off that matches the salutation.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

163 words

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