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Although modern life has brought with it improvements in people’s standard of living, people are not generally happy with their lives. Do you agree or disagree?

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Modern lifestyle has contributed to enrich people’s traditional way of
life
, but some population
disagree
Suggestion
disagrees
 with improvements. Even though some people do not approve modern way of
life
, its merits outweigh disadvantages of modern
life
. I will give reasons why modern
life
 surpassed our expectations in
this
 essay. Modern
life
 encouraged people to switch to cleaner source of energy. Nowadays electric cars are becoming more popular which are considered one the friendliest environmentally means of transport. Despite the fact that electricity is generated in some plants, solar panels and wind firms are used so as to provide
population
Suggestion
the population
 with electricity. People now have an access to
wide range
Suggestion
a wide range
 of information. The mass media are regarded as
significant source
Suggestion
a significant source
 of information throughout the world. Many people utilize the internet, television or radio in order to have breaking news or to entertain themselves. People’s health
rate
Suggestion
ratings
 are boosted owing to enhancing medicine facilities. Physicians had an opportunity to cure patients whose diseases are considered impossible to heal before. There was a
such
 impact as air pollution by transports on people’s health.
However
, transport facilities supplied fast ambulance for patients who do not enable to get
hospital
Suggestion
hospitalized
. Modern lifestyle
emprises
a woman emperor or the wife of an emperor
empress
 better communication facilities for inhabitants. People have an access to communicate one another by mobile phone and social media.
Therefore
, it is rational to conclude that modern
life
 is one the factor to upgrade people’s lives. Modern
life
 offers numerous merits to make population
happy albeit
Accept comma addition
happy, albeit
 some drawbacks.

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