Despite clear warnings from climate scientists, few people are changing their habits. Why is this the case? What can be done to encourage people to protect the environment?

It is true that an increasing number of people are aware that environmental protection is essential to humanity’s well-being, yet most people seem to exert no effort in doing so. I believe there are some reasons of
this
negligent attitude and
also
, certain measures that we can take to protect the
environment
.
To begin
with, there are many reasons behind the indifferent attitude of people. Lack of awareness is probably the foremost reason why the vast majority of individuals a
ppears
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appear
to be negligent about the current environmental issues.
In other words
, They do not know even the consequences of their c
areless,
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carelessness
towards the entire creature living i
n
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on
the earth. (
T
Accept space
(
hey do not know to extent of environmental degradation)
For instance
, provided that every person throws garbage, thinking that it’s just a trifle and don’t realize that if everyone thinks so,
then
this
creates an enormous hazard. Another reason why people do little about the
environment
is that people have become v
ery
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Very
busy in their pursuit of wealth and fame that they have no time to think about the
e
nvironment.
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Environment
For example
, many companies use a lot of plastic for j
ewelry
an adornment (as a bracelet or ring or necklace) made of precious metals and set with gems (or imitation gems)
jewellery
to promote their product.
As a result
, if measures are not taken,
then
these problems can destroy the planet. (Never can a
bovomentioned
problems be erased unless strong solutions are taken). Turning to possible solutions, probably the main remedy would be to carry out e
xtensive awareness campaign
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an extensive awareness campaign
through all forms of communication and strict implementation of waste management.
This
is e
ffective way
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an effective way
the effective way
of educating public sector about the environmental problems and persuading them to take part in activities which are towards solving these problems. To illustrate, if in each school c
lasses
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class
of processing training or collection of garbage in the areas will be held,
then
we can avoid environmental problems.
Besides
, people can lead an environmentally-friendly lifestyle by using bicycles and public transport
instead
of cars which are the main source of carbon dioxide. To put in a nutshell, I pen d
own saying
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down, saying
that it is crucial for individuals to shoulder the responsibility and take some real measures to protect the
environment
.
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