The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.
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The line graph compares the amount of four types of food which people consumed in a European Country from 1979 to 2004. We can see that beef and lamb were the highest consumed types of meat in 1979, which was eaten at around 220
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and exactly 150
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per person per week respectively. The
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of beef
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reached its peak of 240
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in 1983 before tailing off to just around 100
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in 2004. Showing a similar pattern, lamb
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saw a dramatic decline of almost 100
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to around 50
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at the end
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of the period.
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, the chicken used was largely reversed. People gradually ate more and more of
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meat. Starting from only 150
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per week in 1979, the
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rose to around 250
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in 2004 which eventually became the most popular eaten meat in
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country.
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, regarding fish
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,
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it showed a slight decrease during the
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, its
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remained the most stable among all. In summary, the
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of these four foods underwent huge changes over the period, except fish. And the
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of fish
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hung at the bottom of the graph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words grams, consumption with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption
  • fish
  • meat
  • poultry
  • beef
  • lamb
  • trend
  • increase
  • decrease
  • gradual
  • significant
  • fluctuate
  • peak
  • trough
  • steady
  • correlation
  • period
  • data
  • comparison
  • predominant
  • kilograms per capita
  • dietary habits
  • health consciousness
  • sustainability
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