Some movies are serious, designed to make the audience think. Other movies are designed primarily to amuse and entertain. Which type of movie do you prefer?

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I watched a lot of movies in different genres, as tragedy, comedy and epic. All films shot in good quality.

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However, I

prefer to watch romantic movies about youth and I want to

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write, introduce

one of my best films. MIDNIGHT SUN- is a 2018 American romantic

film

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. The

film

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star Bella Throne

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(

Katy) teenage girl with the disease ’Xeroderma Pigmetosum’ which prevents her from going out into sunlight. In the childhood she with their parents loved to go to the coast of the sea, her

mom

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knew how to play the

guitar

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and she always hugged her and taught Katy how to play awesome songs

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the

guitar

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Unfortunately her

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Unfortunately, her

mother dead when she was a child and from birth she has an increased sensitivity to the sun,

therefore

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she cannot leave

home

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during the

day

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, but not

inly

and nothing more

only

night

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, if the sun enters her skin she will get cancer and die and she had to stay at

home

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in the special room. Katy had only two close people who have always been with her ’

dad

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and her friend Morgan” As usual in the

day

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when she

play

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plays

on the

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guitar she

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guitar, she

saw a guy whose name was Charlie. He always went to school on a skateboard and Katy fell in

love

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with him, she became to watch how Charlie

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goes

to school in front of Katie’s house.

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did not know about her. Katy always went to the doctor, slept

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the afternoon and hanging out at

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Time

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The time

comes and they finish high school

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Katie’s

dad

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gives big present for graduating -

moms

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man's

guitar

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. It was for her the most important gift. She decided to go to the train station and sing

song

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a song

the song

songs

and suddenly Charlie heard beautiful voice,

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then

he met the Katy. Katy was so exited when she saw Charlie and she will run away from fear upon seeing him,

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however she

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however, she

will forget

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forgot

about her own diary and at that

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also fall

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also falls

is also falling

has also fallen

love

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. The

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day

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he will decide to stay at the station and wait her and he saw her than they get

know

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to know

each other better. Charlie work

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yacht

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the yacht

a yacht

clean

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cleans

it and he started bringing her there and every

night

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they started dating. After few days Charlie decided to show Seattle and meet with Katy’s father.

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this

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night

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they

hanging

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are hanging

hang

out, they danced, recording the song, walk and laughed, even they

to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits

too

swam in the lake. After all, they sat and basked near the fire, looking at the starry sky. Unfortunately Katy hid her illness from Charlie, she did not notice how it was already sunrise. Seeing the ray of sunrise she ran

home

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with tears, but she did not have

time

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to get

home

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until the rays touched her body. Finding out Charlie about her

illness he

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illness, he

is very shocked. Every

day

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Katy with

dad

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went to the doctor and they found brain cancer, she left to live a few days. Charlie every

day

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came to

her but

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her, but

she did not let her go

home

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and did not answer calls, because she was very sorry about

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case.

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dad

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will persuade her, saying’ if you

love

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him very much, spend your remaining

time

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with him’ than they began to spend

time

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more often. One

day

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Katy decide to see the sun on

yacht

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a yacht

the yacht

with Charlie and die… Charlie will continue his career in swimming, before

leaving he

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leaving, he

says goodbye to

dad

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Katy and say goodbye to the soul with tears in their eyes. When Charlie sets off on the road to turn on the radio and hears the song of his beloved girl who recorded In Seattle, with tears he feels pain and joy upon hearing a voice of Katy. I

love

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this

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film

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, because I learned better what true

love

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is between a girl and

guy

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a guy

. To be

honest I

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honest, I

cry when I watch

this

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film

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, because it is familiar to me……

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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662 words

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Some movies are serious, designed to make the audience think. Other movies are designed primarily to amuse and entertain. Which type of movie do you prefer?

Fully explain your ideas

It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Today there are a lot of websites providing news on the internet. Some people believe that these websites will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying are alternative medicines anf treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Some countries today have passed laws against smoking tobacco in public buildings such as offices and restaurants. Other countries have no intention of doing this. Consider the possible arguments on both sides of this debate, and reach your own conclusion on which side you favour.