Some movies are serious, designed to make the audience think. Other movies are designed primarily to amuse and entertain. Which type of movie do you prefer?

I watched a lot of movies in different genres, as tragedy, comedy and epic. All films shot in good quality.
However I
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However, I
prefer to watch romantic movies about youth and I want to
write introduce
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write, introduce
one of my best films. MIDNIGHT SUN- is a 2018 American romantic
film
. The
film
star Bella Throne
(
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Katy) teenage girl with the disease ’Xeroderma Pigmetosum’ which prevents her from going out into sunlight. In the childhood she with their parents loved to go to the coast of the sea, her
mom
knew how to play the
guitar
and she always hugged her and taught Katy how to play awesome songs
in
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on
the
guitar
.
Unfortunately her
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Unfortunately, her
mother dead when she was a child and from birth she has an increased sensitivity to the sun,
therefore
she cannot leave
home
during the
day
, but not
inly
and nothing more
only
at
night
, if the sun enters her skin she will get cancer and die and she had to stay at
home
in the special room. Katy had only two close people who have always been with her ’
dad
and her friend Morgan” As usual in the
day
when she
play
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plays
on the
guitar she
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guitar, she
saw a guy whose name was Charlie. He always went to school on a skateboard and Katy fell in
love
with him, she became to watch how Charlie
go
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goes
to school in front of Katie’s house.
However he
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However, he
did not know about her. Katy always went to the doctor, slept
at
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in
the afternoon and hanging out at
night
.
Time
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The time
comes and they finish high school
.
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.
Katie’s
dad
gives big present for graduating -
moms
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man's
guitar
. It was for her the most important gift. She decided to go to the train station and sing
song
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a song
the song
songs
and suddenly Charlie heard beautiful voice,
than
subsequently or soon afterward (often used as sentence connectors)
then
he met the Katy. Katy was so exited when she saw Charlie and she will run away from fear upon seeing him,
however she
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however, she
will forget
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forgot
about her own diary and at that
time
he
also fall
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also falls
is also falling
has also fallen
in
love
. The
next
day
he will decide to stay at the station and wait her and he saw her than they get
know
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to know
each other better. Charlie work
in
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on
yacht
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the yacht
a yacht
he
clean
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cleans
it and he started bringing her there and every
night
they started dating. After few days Charlie decided to show Seattle and meet with Katy’s father.
At
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On
In
this
night
they
hanging
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are hanging
hang
out, they danced, recording the song, walk and laughed, even they
to
to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits
too
swam in the lake. After all, they sat and basked near the fire, looking at the starry sky. Unfortunately Katy hid her illness from Charlie, she did not notice how it was already sunrise. Seeing the ray of sunrise she ran
home
with tears, but she did not have
time
to get
home
until the rays touched her body. Finding out Charlie about her
illness he
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illness, he
is very shocked. Every
day
Katy with
dad
went to the doctor and they found brain cancer, she left to live a few days. Charlie every
day
came to
her but
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her, but
she did not let her go
home
and did not answer calls, because she was very sorry about
this
case.
However her
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However, her
dad
will persuade her, saying’ if you
love
him very much, spend your remaining
time
with him’ than they began to spend
time
more often. One
day
Katy decide to see the sun on
yacht
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a yacht
the yacht
with Charlie and die… Charlie will continue his career in swimming, before
leaving he
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leaving, he
says goodbye to
dad
Katy and say goodbye to the soul with tears in their eyes. When Charlie sets off on the road to turn on the radio and hears the song of his beloved girl who recorded In Seattle, with tears he feels pain and joy upon hearing a voice of Katy. I
love
this
film
, because I learned better what true
love
is between a girl and
guy
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a guy
. To be
honest I
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honest, I
cry when I watch
this
film
, because it is familiar to me……
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