Some people say that what children watch influences their behavior. Others believe the amount of time they spend on television influences their behavior most. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Perhaps the idea of watching

TV

causes children’s behaviour badly that has become a widespread one in recent decade, with many individuals holding different beliefs on it.

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a message that is stated or declared; a communication (oral or written) setting forth particulars or facts etc

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and there are many compelling reasons to support my view. In the

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think television

is having

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has

a huge

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characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features

negative

impact in Society. The fact that

childrent

a young person of either sex

children

link violence on

televesion

broadcasting visual images of stationary or moving objects

television

with

crime rate

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the crime rate

crime rates

in the real world. Children can easily copy the behaviour they see on the screen. Namely, nowadays many youth

TV

programms

a series of steps to be carried out or goals to be accomplished

programs

programmes

programmers

are based mainly

voilence

an act of aggression (as one against a person who resists)

violence

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, swearing, bullying, and horror films that youths are

bacoming

according with custom or propriety

becoming

an

addvctive

causing or characterized by addiction

addictive

.

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, not only affect

behaviour but

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behaviour, but

aslo

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also

children less health

becouse

for the reason that; on account of

because

they

sepend

pass time in a specific way

spend

their most of time in front of

TV

screen

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in place of, or as an alternative to

instead

of playing

activity

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action

active

games.

As a result

, it is leading to

childern’s

eyesight problems at their early ages.

On the other hand

, advertisers often aim their market at children that they can be easily influenced by

adevertisments

. For

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an occurrence of something

instance

, when children see adverts of heroes films or

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a machine for performing calculations automatically

computer

games that they put pressure to buy them that are

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a waste

of money and useless.

Moreover

, some

TV

programms

a series of steps to be carried out or goals to be accomplished

programs

programmes

do not require much

tought

the content of cognition; the main thing you are thinking about

thought

taught

that same cartoons include only love stories not moral

fary

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Fary

faery

-tales. Whereas it is not

suit

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suited

for youth while they are

learing

the cognitive process of acquiring skill or knowledge

learning

leading

wearing

moralities and kinds. In conclusion,

although

both factors have their own

imflications

something that is inferred (deduced or entailed or implied)

implications

. I concur that parents should choose what they their children watch and Advertising during

children

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children's

programs must be strictly controlled.