You have lost your student ID Card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student service. Write: Advise them of yout situation; Explain how this is affecting you; Request a new card
Hello, dear sir/madam.
My name is Anastassia, my student ID number is 123456AK, and
I'mm
a student at the nursing school in our college.
First of all, I'm writing Correct your spelling
I am
this
letter with the purpose of asking for your help. Unfortunately, I have lost my student card, and it caused several problems. I can't use our library, our computer centre. Moreover
, sometimes I have a problem entering the campus.
I tried to understand where I had lost it, furthermore
, all of my friends tried to find it, I posted the ads on the campus as well as
in the entire town, but nobody found it.
So I beg you to help me and to make a new card for me. As you know, it's the exam period, so I desperately need it. I'm ready to pay for a card, as well as
a penalty, if necessary.
Best regards, looking forward to hearing from you.
Sincerely yours, Anastassia.Submitted by anastasia on
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coherence cohesion
Consider providing a specific, structured list of the problems you're facing to enhance clarity.
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Double-check for minor grammatical errors, such as 'I'mm' instead of 'I'm', to improve overall quality.
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Clear and concise expression of the situation, its impacts, and the request for a new card.
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Polite and formal tone is consistently maintained, suitable for the purpose and audience.
coherence cohesion
Logical structure with clear paragraphs for each main idea: introduction, problem description, actions taken, and request.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite