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Nowadays celebrities earn more money than politicians. What are the reasons for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

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In the world nowadays, people gain
money
 in the variety of ways with their talents and abilities. It is true to say that the total revenue of celebrities is more than the politicians. In my view,
this
 is a positive development and I will support my idea with the following examples and reasons. On the one hand, there is a considerable difference in earning annual
money
 between famous people like celebrities and politicians. Remarkably reasons make
this
 diversity
such
 as a positive position in
society
.
For instance
, superstars which were spent a significant time of her/his life to become an outstanding
person
by
Suggestion
By
 means of playing movies with its problem and difficulty.
Therefore
, they become a popular
person
 with
positive
Suggestion
Positive
 and amiable appearance, among young and elder people.
Moreover
, the advertisement and commercial company suggests a well pay contract to advertise their products. Not only they earn considerable
money
 but
also
 they possess influence on the highest rate of people. What is more reason is an investment company which is searching to find popular people to investigate with them;
However
, people who have politic responsibility, politicians, almost become an aggressive figure among
society
.
This
 may be caused by their politicians and rough decisions which are unpopular.
On the other hand
, the advantages of diversity in gaining
money
 between distinguished people
and
Suggestion
And
statesman
Suggestion
The statesman
Statesman
A statesman
 is more than disadvantages. Possess impression among the
society
 after that becomes a pattern and template of people, especially youth people are one of the benefits and acceptable reason to be a consider that
this
 is a positive development. In conclusion, to convert a popular
person
 among
society
 with a kindly picture has more benefit
such
 as an unbelievable income that the unpopular
person
.

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