The world is in constant danger at loosing varieties of languages and cultures. This is due to similarities of lifestyles everywhere. Why it is such and what steps should be taken to stop it?

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contemporary era, the

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is changing by leaps and bounds. Nowadays, only few languages are dominated around the

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as English, French, Spanish and so on. It is

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an undeniable fact that

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language

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are vanishing due to similarities of lifestyles everywhere. There are a number of causes for

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situation, but only a few solutions.

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and foremost, these languages are only spoken by aging people and they do not pass their languages to their children and grandchildren.

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, the youths are following western culture nowadays and they do not want to learn them mother tongue because they feel

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language

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is not worthy of them.

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generation is the most advance generation. They not only well educated, but

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they aware of which

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is more suitable for them to shape their career.

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to the above

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these languages are in constant danger, because of advancement of technology. These days, softwares only contain those languages, which are dominated.

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, many national companies do their trading in international languages. Due to

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, local people are forced to shift their local languages.

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world

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the world

is becoming a global village so, people not only eat foreign food, but

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also wears

foreign clothes. Owing to

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, their children not being taught in their mother tongue. There are lesser number of possible solutions, if a

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dies,

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the cultures and traditions of that

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will

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die, because of

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people can not see the

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from the perspective of that

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. So, people should pass their mother tongue to their children and grandchildren.

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, they should save recordings for oral and written manuscripts for grammar. So, if the

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die,

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some people would able to learn

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from these records. To conclude, the government should enact some laws for preserving local languages.

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language

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is not only means of communication, but

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also it represents speaker's identity

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it also represents the speaker's identity

also it represents the speaker's identity

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can communicate, because it expresses art, vision, science and culture. So, saving of

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is most important.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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340 words

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The world is in constant danger at loosing varieties of languages and cultures. This is due to similarities of lifestyles everywhere. Why it is such and what steps should be taken to stop it?

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You recently stayed at your friends's place to look after the house while he/she is away. you accidently damaged something in his/her house. write a letter to your friend. in your lettter you should describe what the accident was explain when it happened. suggest how you damage can be fixed.

Topic: Some people say that poor students or students who come from rural areas often find it difficult to have access to university education. What should be done to solve this problem? 250 words.