The deadly coronavirus COVID-19 has spread to at least 69 countries, affecting all aspects of life. As part of its disastrous influence, Vietnamese schools at all levels have been closed for more than a month. There is a common argument that children should be allowed to go back to school for the sake of themselves, their family and the whole society. How far do you agree with this opinion? Your essay should be at least 250 words in length.

The mortal
coronavirus
is called which COVID-19 is a global threat to 69 nations around the world at
this
time. Because of its perilous transmission, all students in Vietnam have remained at home for a month. It is often claimed that the schools should allow students to attend school regarding benefits to themselves, their family and the community.
However
, I strongly feel that
this
view is incorrect and
this
essay I will support my opinion with examples. The
first
and foremost reason for
this
is that COVID-19 is an alarming global infectious disease. Many doctors have found that it will infect many people easier and faster if we gather in crowded places.
Therefore
, If the schools allow students to return to school,
this
will increase the spread of contagion among students due to a large number of students in a classroom. As a practical example shows that some developed countries in the world,
such
as Japan and Korea, still send students to schools during
this
fatal pandemic.
As a result
, it elevates the risk of person-to-person transmission and thousands of people are infected with the
coronavirus
. It is a
favorable
encouraging or approving or pleasing
favourable
idea that the Ministry of Education in Vietnam has left students absent from schools for more than a month to manage to avert
this
fearsome spread. The other reason is that the students cannot protect themselves fully against the epidemic. It seems apparent that young children are not as vigilant as mature people. Whenever they feel uneasy or hot, they may throw their masks away and do not wash their hands regularly after touching objects. On top of that, their immune has not grown fully, so they are susceptible to infection and difficult to recuperate.
Therefore
, it is challenging for educators to control the disease in schools. To deal with
this
phenomenon, the students can stay at home and learn through some online software
such
as Zoom.
us
Suggestion
Us
. What is more, they can push back school time without a summer break. All students can ensure their curriculum along with the safety of their health.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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