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Millions of people every year move to English_speaking countries such as Australia, in order to study at school, college or university. Why do so many people want to study in English? Why is English such an important international language?

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Nowadays without relation with the universe around us and other countries, it seems impossible to be up to date and the main tool of
this
 interaction is an international
language
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abroad, you
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to speak
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in
our local
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English
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inevitably arise
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glish?
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
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has
 lot of advantages, claiming that it not only improve the level of your
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English
but
also
 helps you to reach to the main sources of your investigations which mainly written in
English
.Mo
re over,
in addition
Moreover
the wide range and majority of articles and books on websites and libraries are written in
en
glish.
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
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s much simpler to learn so in
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English
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ountry some years before, in order to continue his education and now after gr
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graduation, he
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an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
pen mind to the different views of the recent
world
 and makes new overseas relationships which could help me to progress in international business around the
world
. In brief,
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studies
in mother
language
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easy
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m of the mind that all in all ,
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eing an international graduated man and speaking in global and uniform
language
 of the
world
such
 as
English
, would be more effective and useful to connect the new
world
.

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