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Some people think newspaper is the most effective way to obtain the latest information because it has more influence than other forms of media. Do you agree or disagree?

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In recent day,
information
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 is delivered in various forms
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 as printed and electronic modes. Many people assume that printed-newspaper is the most effective method to get hold of up to date
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 and extremely influential compares to other types of media. I strongly disagree that the newspaper is the best option to get current
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. The advance of communication technology
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 as the invention of smart-phone has completely changed people behaviour, especially in term of acquiring
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.
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, despite reading a printed-newsletter, people prefer to use a device to access electronic news
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 as Jakarta Post, The Guardian, and other news websites. Beside handy and convenient,
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 method is saving much time since people could search for the intended-news which they are looking for.
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, the amount of
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 provided by electronic media forms is abundance,
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 it could meet the people need.
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, the
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 provided by electronic media forms is more up to date compared to printed-media form since the publisher need no extra time in term of printing and distributing process. The printed-newspaper is seen as one of a contributor to environmental damage because of using paper as basic material.
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, out of date newspapers rarely use for other purposes and it becomes a pile of garbage that could lead to environmental pollution and ruining the scenery. In conclusion, I consider that the newspaper is not the best way to get the newest
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 because there are other forms of media provided the fastest and cheapest
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