Some people like to work in teams. Others prefer to work alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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are two types of working. One of them is working with a
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, another one is working individually.
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some people prefer to
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alone, I believe it is much better to
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in teams. If we compare these two working types, the benefits of
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team
cooperative work done by a team (especially when it is effective)
teamwork
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are more than those of working alone. The advantages of working with a
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can be found below.
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, I prefer working in a
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because
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work
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allows a
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to
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according to his or her strength. Since the
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members apply their strong sides to the
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, the completion time will be faster.
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, I was involved in a car design
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several years ago. One
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made engineering calculations to understand which parts are critical
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our design, I made the drawings of the car components, and another friend of mine made the presentation of our
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to the professor. He gave us a good response and additional points since we completed our
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before the due date. To be more precise, we did a good job, because we divided the
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according to our strong sides. Another reason why I prefer to
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with a
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is that I think that
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type of
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establishes a better relationship between the
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members. As humans, socialization is important for us and working with a
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gives us a chance to improve our relationship. When people are in a
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, they have to communicate with each other at each step of the process.
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, in our
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year elective course, I made new friends because we were involved in a
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project
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together. Thanks to the
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, we did build a good relationship among each other, and we are still in touch.
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,
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work
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improves the sense of responsibility. All
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members are aware that their performance affects the
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, so all
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members try to do their best and
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hard to get better results.
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, a few years ago, some of my friends and I participated in a competition which was related to optimization. Since there were a lot of things to do, we divided the topics among each other. We did not have enough information about one of the shared parts.
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, a
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who got that subject made a lot of effort to learn the topic well. He attended online courses and read books related to that field. Eventually, he accomplished a great job. What I am trying to say is that in a
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working, even if a
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does not have enough information related to his or her working area, he or she may learn the things with his or her effort because he or she knows that a mistake will cause negative outcomes. In conclusion, working with a
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makes the things easier and helps the people
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more happily. If we take into account all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that working in a
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has more advantages than working alone.

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