Public celebrations (festivals, national day) are held in some countries. Some people think that they are very expensive and the government should spend money on some other important issues. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the number of festivals or national events being held all over the world are rapidly increasing which leads to different countries spending

excessive amount

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excessive amounts

an excessive amount

of money for them to be

successful

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successful, however

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many people believe that

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government should allocate their budget to more significant causes

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as education and

healthcare

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health care

. To commence with, festivals can be helpful to a nation's economy. Important national festivities can attract tourists to flock the events

place prompting

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place, prompting

them to spend their money to purchase basic necessities

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local foods, acquire comfortable

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making or becoming suitable; adjusting to circumstances

accommodation

accommodations

and buy souvenirs.

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, these festivals can increase the popularity of a country

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encourage

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encouraging

investors to

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operate

different types of businesses.

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, these festivals can bring more employment to the local residents and boost the tourism industry

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aiding to an improved economy

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, festivities needs a huge budget in order to showcase show-stopping shows and invite visitors that can help influence and encourage tourist to come which can be distributed to more important entities

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as the department of health and education. With regards to healthcare, there are evident lack of equipments and manpower which can be rectified by a bigger funding from the government. Meanwhile, it is

apparent especially

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apparent, especially

in public schools that there is a declining number of teachers and teaching materials for students to utilize to ensure a quality learning experience for the younger generation. In conclusion, I partly agree that the government should give more significance to education and healthcare when allocating financial

respurces but

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resources, but

resources but

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can not

can not

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be denied that national events can be a way to generate income to a country.