We live in a world in which we are constantly exposed to advertising. To what extent do you advertisement influence our choices as a customer and what effect does it have on our lifestyle? discuss the issue and give your opinion give reason for your answer with examples.

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Public promotion of commercial products

is invariably increasing

Suggestion

has invariably increased

invariably increases

day by day, which is easily seen everywhere. It has a great impact on the living standard they affect your choice toward the selecting of

product

Use synonyms

This

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service

show

Suggestion

shows

negative as well as

some

one or some or every or all without specification

any

positive side, which will be discussed in the following paragraph.

To begin

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with the reason how its ads influence

customers

Suggestion

customer's

customers'

choice, it can easily attract the buyers by the beautiful picture and attractive discount offer.

For instance

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, at the end of the winter and summer season shopkeeper have to finish their stock,

thus

Linking Words

they announce discount on the products. By

this

Linking Words

strategy they finish their stock and earn a profit.

company

Suggestion

Company

target a specified group of people like senior citizen, children, youth, women, student by the promotion of the products.

Although

Linking Words

Accept space

it is

it's

aware individual about the

product

Use synonyms

which are launched recently. It might same time saving deal, because advertisements seen everywhere in the daily routine like in

newspaper

Suggestion

newspapers

a newspaper

the newspaper

, pamphlets, magazine, television, radio,

hording

29th President of the United States; two of his appointees were involved in the Teapot Dome scandal (1865-1923)

Harding

On the other hand

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, sometimes ads mislead the buyers. Retailers make false promise about the

product

Use synonyms

to sell. They show that the

product

Use synonyms

is organic and

hygiene but

Accept comma addition

hygiene, but

actually it is made by the using chemicals. It

also

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claimed that the

product

Use synonyms

is harm free and never show

advert effect

Suggestion

the advert effect

your body or skin and it

give

Suggestion

gives

instant results, but in the actual there is nothing is going to happen like that. In conclusion,

customer

Suggestion

the customer

customers

should be aware about the true and false promises, they have to think in

logical way

Suggestion

a logical way

whether it is safe or not.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

261 words

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We live in a world in which we are constantly exposed to advertising. To what extent do you advertisement influence our choices as a customer and what effect does it have on our lifestyle? discuss the issue and give your opinion give reason for your answer with examples.

Include an introduction and conclusion

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Write about the following topic: Should private schools receive government funding? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building the live in. What are the reason for this? How can people research this?

Many people use distance-learning programmes (study material, post, TV, the Internet, etc.) to study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefits of attending college or university. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?