We live in a world in which we are constantly exposed to advertising. To what extent do you advertisement influence our choices as a customer and what effect does it have on our lifestyle? discuss the issue and give your opinion give reason for your answer with examples.

Public promotion of commercial products
is invariably increasing
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has invariably increased
invariably increases
day by day, which is easily seen everywhere. It has a great impact on the living standard they affect your choice toward the selecting of
product
.
This
service
show
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shows
negative as well as
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
positive side, which will be discussed in the following paragraph.
To begin
with the reason how its ads influence
customers
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customer's
customers'
choice, it can easily attract the buyers by the beautiful picture and attractive discount offer.
For instance
, at the end of the winter and summer season shopkeeper have to finish their stock,
thus
they announce discount on the products. By
this
strategy they finish their stock and earn a profit.
company
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Company
target a specified group of people like senior citizen, children, youth, women, student by the promotion of the products.
Although
,
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,
it
it is
it's
aware individual about the
product
which are launched recently. It might same time saving deal, because advertisements seen everywhere in the daily routine like in
newspaper
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newspapers
a newspaper
the newspaper
, pamphlets, magazine, television, radio,
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.
On the other hand
, sometimes ads mislead the buyers. Retailers make false promise about the
product
to sell. They show that the
product
is organic and
hygiene but
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hygiene, but
actually it is made by the using chemicals. It
also
claimed that the
product
is harm free and never show
advert effect
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the advert effect
your body or skin and it
give
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gives
instant results, but in the actual there is nothing is going to happen like that. In conclusion,
customer
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the customer
customers
should be aware about the true and false promises, they have to think in
logical way
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a logical way
whether it is safe or not.
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