The maps below show a bookstore in 2000 and now. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Both maps display a bookstore, before and after it was reconstructed. Some departments were replaced by others and some were moved to another location.
In 2000,on the left side of the
entrance
the shop has a large row of bookshelves with fiction Add a comma
,entrance
books
. On the opposite side were service
desk and a little Correct article usage
the service
further
-shelves with non-fiction books
. The middle of store
was Add an article
the store
also
occupied by rows of books
on such
fields ,as travel, art, hobbies, cookery and new books
.
Nowadays, the shop became more convenient and interesting in terms of choice for its visitors. New books
and books
for travel as well as
service desk are still kept at their original places. The middle section of the shop was feed
up Change the verb form
was fed
was feeding
for
new sitting places ,conclude three tables and chairs Change preposition
with
round
them. Correct your spelling
around
However
, the fiction is given less space as it now ,is sharing a row with materials for art, hobbies and cookery.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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