Nowadays, most countries improve the standard of living through economic development. But some social values are lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of the phenomenon outweigh the disadvantages?

At present, the standards of living are raised while

economy

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the economy

is thriving in most countries, while some values in the

society

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are lost. From my perspective, the disadvantage of the phenomenon

outweigh

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outweighs

its advantages.

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of all, there is a wide range of economic benefits if a country focuses on economic development.

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, it is evident that the standard of living would be highly improved.

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, the infrastructure quality would be raised significantly and people can enjoy more materialistic conveniences of more advanced technology and engineering, like better

roading

the cognitive process of understanding a written linguistic message

reading

and electronic devices.

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, spiritually, economic boom does not equal good social value and high rate of satisfaction in the

society

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. One notable point is that economic development means intense labouring in the workplace, in which employee should work harder for longer working hours.

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phenomenon, or the so-called alienation

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a philosophical term describing a situation in which people feel they are detached from the environment and are

ristricted

subject to restriction or subjected to restriction

restricted

by

mechanic

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mechanical

work in a capitalised city so that they cannot truly be themselves), would lead to a

decresed

made less in size or amount or degree

decreased

decrease

level of happiness in the whole

society

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, and

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aggrevate

make worse

aggravate

the grudge, anger, complain in the

society

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, which would lead to a series of anti-social behaviours. Anti-social

behavious

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

behaviours

would harm the

society

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and threaten the safety of citizens. In conclusion, I would agree with the view that

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the cons of the phenomenon outweigh the pros. Even though economic development leads to a better

materialistical

marked by materialism

materialistic

life, I still agree that it brings more drawbacks into people's

lives it

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lives, it

does not necessarily mean that it will benefit the

society

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spiritually.