The charts below give information on the ages of people when they got married in one particular country in 1996 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and repairing the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar charts compare the variation
of
the percentage of men and Change preposition
in
women
getting married in 1998 and 2008. In general, the proportion of married individuals of both genders experienced a slight decrease for those aged under 30 years
old and a noticeable increase for the other age
groups in the given decade, and the age
from 25 to 29 years
old was the most ideal age
to get married. It is also
obvious that the marriage age
for men is usually higher than Change preposition
for women’s
women’s
.
As presented in the chart, there was a minor decline in the percentage of Change noun form
women
women
getting married under the age
of 24, especially the percentage of early 20-year-old married females was half in 2008 compared to that in 1998. Noticeably, no males got married during
the Change preposition
between
age
of 16 to 19. The rate of 25-29-year-old women
married to their husband
remained unchanged at approximately 11,5% over a 10–year period, Fix the agreement mistake
husbands
while
men’s figure observed a slight drop to 8% in 2008.
With regard to older age
groups, a substantial rise was witnessed in the proportion of 30-37 years
old married people in both genders which accounted for 8% for females and 11% for males in 2008, in comparison with 7% and 9% respectively in 1998. For people aged above 35, the proportion of married men surged substantially to 9% and nearly 7%, resulting in twofold figures of
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for
women
over 35 years
old.Submitted by qelichmammad1376 on
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