Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it will replace face-face education soon. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

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People were grown up with traditional
education
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since alphabets were created. In
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high-tech era
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almost everything is going with technology and some people
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think
about to substitute online
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in traditional
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. Different styles of learning
has
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have
different advantages and disadvantages. Online
education
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make
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makes
has made
us low costs, saving time and we can access some courses from abroad. On the
another
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other
side, online
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is not responsive, can’t make questions to lecturers instantly, have no opportunity of making friends like
real world
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the real world
. If we are accessing the courses from abroad with
live
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life
lessons
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need to aware of the time zones
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we may miss the class. Traditional
education
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is more expensive than online
education
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. We need to buy books, need to pay additional charges and have to spend extra time for travelling to reach there.
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, going to
school
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is not just for study, it’s like our
second
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home where your friends and teachers will fill your soul with laugh, listen your problems and ease your pains. One more,
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is one of the place where we can get professional network in seminars, talk shows or
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activities. In
school
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short trips, we will get to know closer and our friendship bond will be stronger than before. By comparing the advantages for two types of learning, traditional
education
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has
enormous amount
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an enormous amount
of benefits. Our
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friends won’t be live in
same places
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the same places
through out
all the way through
throughout
their lives so that we can strengthen our network to
entire nation
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an entire nation
entire nations
or entire world once they spread out. I have no doubt traditional
education
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is
irreplaceable how
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irreplaceable, how
good online
education
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is.
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