Some people think that being able to communicate online is breaking geographical barriers and enabling people, who would never have the chance to meet, communicate online. What are the advantages of international communications? Are there any disadvantage too?

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world is a global village and with the coming of internet the communication has gone online. In present times, most people tend to prefer communicating online as compared to offline.
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has allowed to bridge gap between people living at far off places and allowing people to interact with friends and family living
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any corner of the world. Interacting behind the screen has brought about great benefits. One of the major advantages of online interaction is that people can keep in touch with their loved ones at any moment.
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, a person who works in Australia need not to wait for days to interact with his or her family living overseas, but can chat any moment either in social media or use any of the applications available.
Secondly
, it allows faster communication among people. Example, if a businessman wants to share an information or want to get an information from another individual, he or she can get is faster than before. Even more, it allows for greater communication between people from different countries allowing cross cultural interaction.
On the other hand
, international communications have opened up the door for some drawbacks as well.
Firstly
, people are now more likely to get lost in the world of online interaction losing a touch with people who are near to them.
Secondly
, often people waste their time and energy talking with people they will never see in their life and miss out on building relationships in real life. Overall, international communications have brought about people closer and made interacting easier.
However
, completely immersing oneself into the cyberspace often leads to random wandering of people, leading them nowhere.
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