All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

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We are being a witness of
current situation
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the current situation
where an owner of fossil
fuels
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fuel
car
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is getting more than electric
car
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. Specially, in India or country like India, are not capable enough to afford
electric
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an electric car
car
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which is
more environment
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more environmentally
friendly.
This
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essay will describe the positive points of accepting electric
car
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instead
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of ordinary
car
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with supportive example. In my opinion, choosing chargeable vehicle would be a
cleaver
showing self-interest and shrewdness in dealing with others
clever
option
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rather than going for
such
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option
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which uses natural resources only. Let’s talk about the positive points of availing surrounding friendly transportation.
Firstly
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, it’s not only control the pollution system of
air but
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air, but
also
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stops using natural resources which is
good
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better
for civilization to keep the entire
eco system
a system formed by the interaction of a community of organisms with their physical environment
ecosystem
in a systematic manner.
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, if we start using all non- reusable sources from
earth
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the earth
,
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we will be in danger very soon.
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, it would be a wise decision to select an unlimited delivery of energy to maintain
urban lifestyle
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the urban lifestyle
an urban lifestyle
as well as save limited fuels.
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, petrol or diesels, not reusable materials, both are coming from the core of Mother Nature which is used by most of the cars. But new invention, rechargeable
car
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could a great
option
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for us.
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other hand
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the other hand
, there
are
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is
also
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array
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an array
of disadvantages of using rechargeable vehicle.
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, these types of options are too much expensive for middle class people who generally purchase normal transport.
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, people who will opt for
this
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option
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they will face difficulties while recharging
car
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in the middle of lonely place. As an example, in India, there are no sufficient charging points in every gas station. In conclusion, keeping in mind the
eco system
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Eco system
ecosystem
issue,
government
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the government
must take positive steps toward accepting
car
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which uses unlimited sources.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fossil fuels
  • emissions
  • air pollution
  • greenhouse gases
  • climate change
  • sustainable
  • renewable
  • electric vehicles
  • battery technology
  • charging infrastructure
  • range anxiety
  • government support
  • incentives
  • subsidies
  • renewable energy
  • environmental impact
  • energy efficiency
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