Many people try to look younger than their real age. What are the reasons people do this? Is this a good or bad thing?

The trends

nowadays is

Suggestion

nowadays are

towards to look younger than their real

age

. Looking younger or being well-groom is the effects of the developing world. As looking younger or being well-groom people spend lots of money and own times since if you want to

looking

Suggestion

look

younger you have to do some important things. From my point of view I

thinks

Suggestion

think

the things that people have to do for looking younger are bad

affect

a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon

effect

effect effect

on people from

health

and individual aspect.

To begin

with, more and more people who are

escipally

to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common

especially

celebrity wanted to look attractive and

beatiful

delighting the senses or exciting intellectual or emotional admiration

beautiful

since they are generally in front of cameras and society.

Therefore

, those who want to look younger than their real

age

apply some harmful ways like make up or aesthetic surgery. A great many experts in

this

fields

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field

state that doing excessive make up on

skin

Suggestion

the skin

is detrimental ways to one's physical

health

. In

additon

a component that is added to something to improve it

addition

, making up is costly to implement because you have to high pay to buy cosmetics.

On the other hand

, the other reason why people try to look younger is

splurge

Suggestion

a splurge

the splurge

. Some

people especially

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people, especially

women irritate when you asked her ages since they don't want to reveal their real

age

. Because of

this

reason that

this

people

Suggestion

person

have

Suggestion

has

some

opeartions

the right to buy or sell property at an agreed price; the right is purchased and if it is not exercised by a stated date the money is forfeited

options

like aesthetic surgery. According to a great number of

health

reports, having

surgery especially

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surgery, especially

repeatedly is more dangerous methods to look younger than real. To conclude, in the light of

this

information above, it can be clearly said that growing old is a real

sitiation

the general state of things; the combination of circumstances at a given time

situation

station

for people. Because of

this

we should approve our real

age

and we recognize some bad impact on our

health

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16Grammar mistakes
 

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275 words

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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