Since traveling abroad became relatively inexpensive, more countries have opened their doors for foreign tourists. Is it a positive or negative trend? Discuss.

In our modern world, the need for overseas

tourism

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has become much more prevalent due to re

asonable price.

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the reasonable price

In response, there is a growing trend of countries’ opening their bo

arders f

a line that indicates a boundary

borders

or foreigners.

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trend certainly has its own benefits, I feel that there will be much more drawbacks, which will be discussed in

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essay. There are various reasons why it might be considered beneficial for authorities to welcome visitors from around the world to their homelands. According to some statistics, the profits coming from

tourism

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account for a huge proportion of the local ec

onomies.

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economy

Billions of dollars per years can be invested in building hospitals, organizing state-funded schools and other social welfare in order to better citizens’ living standards.

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, tr

aveling a

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

broad brings about knowledge and experiences, broadens our horizons which creates a more judgment-free and loving world for human beings. At the same time, it

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enhances mutual cu

lture respect b

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culture, respect

etween countries and strengthens international relations.

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, I agree with those who argue that there should be limitations on opening doors for foreign tourists.

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of all, mass

tourism

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can be a serious risk to national environment and ecology. Without making sustainable de

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development

lans, the hotter a spot is, the greater it will be commercially exploited to the extent that the

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generations may never see that attraction in its pristine form.

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, the vacation industry is an effective and strong tool for culture invasion. There is a good chance that the original background of a country might slowly fade as the natives are heavily influenced by other regions’ cultures and sometimes opposing their mother tongue ones.

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, when it comes to a place

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supposed to enhance Vietnamese patterns like Hoi An Ancient Town, the number of only-for-the-West zones is nearly equal to traditional places. In conclusion,

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it might seem sensible for the governments’ promoting overseas

tourism

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, I personally prefer the current system in which our environment and cultures are preserved. It is highly re

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hat every legal acts should be taken into consideration in order to balance between the pros and cons of

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trend.