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Some people believe that Technology such as mobile phones, cell phones are destroying social interaction. Do you agree or disagree?

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In recent years, with the advancement in
technology
 of mobile phones and cell phones, many people think that face to face interaction
among
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between
 masses has ruined. I completely agree with the notion because they can talk as well as send messages through mobile phones. To
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comment
 with, social distancing has increased significantly with the development of
Technology
 because people can share information by talking on cell phones.
Besides
, they can interact with anyone by sitting in their homes, so they need not travel any distance.
For example
, in a recent survey conducted by TRAI, it is found that the number of phone calls has increased substantially as compared to the past,
that is
 sixty percent.
In other words
, talking on mobile phones has increased,
thus
 the reduction in personal interaction.
Moreover
, with
development
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developments
the development
 in
technology
, there are several applications have developed through which they can do messaging and even
do
engage in
make
 video calls.
Further
, they can create groups in the applications, and they can add their friends and can do group chatting and video calling.
For instance
, WhatsApp is one of the most famous applications that people use to interact with their friends and family members. They can not only send messages, but
also
do
engage in
make
 video calls with the help of it. Thereby they hardly connect with their peers personally. To summarise, the
technology
 has destroyed the social interactions among people as they can talk and chat through these devices. In my opinion, social interaction has reduced due to
technology
.

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