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Global warming is one of the biggest threat of our environment. What causes global warming? What solutions are there to this problem?

#threat #environment
It is irrefutable that the global temperature has increased at an alarming rate in the
last
 50 years, which affect the climate and
also
 increases the level of global warming, is the biggest threat to our
environment
.
Firstly
,
this
 essay will not only critique the reasons behind
this
 phenomenon, but
also
 present some potential measures to tackle with
this
 issue. It cannot be denied that the most common one reason is an industrial area. In many developing countries, there are numerous factors which make a distinct type of things and the amount of waste which come from these factories is enough dangerous either for
environment
 or human's. The other cause is pollution. By
this
 I mean, mills
also
 emit harmful gases, which puts effect on the air. As well as nowadays, the majority of the people use private vehicles rather than public transport so, own automobiles will produce a lot of poisonous emission, which cause air pollution.
Although
 the global warming issue is critical,
this
 can be eradicated with some efforts of both
government
 and local people. As
government
 should initiate some rules and regulations to ensure the safety of the
environment
. Apart from
this
,
government
 should collect the tax amount from both industrial section and whom who sale automobiles.
Moreover
,
government
Suggestion
the government
governments
 should implement some new rule for those who throwing rubbish in the river and near to riverside
then
 he or she will have to pay penalty. Local people should plant some trees for making the better
environment
 which helps to refresh the air. The conclusion to be drawn is that
government
 should heed proper attention to reduce these threats which have still detrimental effect on both climate and life of people. If
government
 bodies and local people join their hand to mitigate
this
 problem,
then
 it will be fruitful for the safety of society and the
environment
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global warming
  • environmental degradation
  • climate change
  • greenhouse effect
  • carbon dioxide
  • methane
  • emissions
  • fossil fuels
  • deforestation
  • industrialization
  • livestock farming
  • population growth
  • waste management
  • volcanic eruptions
  • polar ice caps
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