Last month you had an overseas holiday with some friends where you stayed at their house. They have jút send you some holiday photos. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter: thank them for the holiday and the photos explain why you didn't write earlier invite them to come and stay with you

Dear Usachibi and Mei, Thank you so much for sending me the photos of the holidays that I spent with you
guys
over the
last
month. I can say, it was one of the best holidays I ever had, I had a great time with so many happy and joyful
moment
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in Nara and I learn a lot about Japan’s ancient history. I wanted to write earlier,
however
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I had been struggling to regain momentum at work. It was so hard to get back to my work routine after the vacation. Believe
or
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not, I really wish I could spend some more time there. Now I would like to make a request to you
guys
to visit my home city Ho Chi Minh in the month of December
this
year. I truly want to spend
Chisrtmas
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Christmas
Day with you
guys
, I will show you how funny it is when you have a Christmas in
tropical
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country. I assume that you two will make
this
trip possible and you
guys
must stay with me, there is plenty of room in my house so don’t worry about accommodation. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Queen
Senerity
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Serenity
Severity
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