what are advantages and disadvantages of using social network

Are they the best thing that humanity has ever created? Do they really help or drag us down on the way of development? When we talk about
this
topic, it is worth to remember that the unambiguous opinion won't come. But I’m going to give at least a few points for your personal thoughts.
First
I wanna say that incredible speed of technological development is the dictates of time, so because of it, we just have no opportunity to ban or prohibit using the gadgets despite their detrimental effects on health, and
this
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these
are no mentions the dependencies in the game, and social networks. And as I think it’s a really serious global problem. But
on the other hand
different new apps and websites give people a lot of information about ways of treatments. Or using the social networks you can tell people about your problems and with common effort there will be a high probability of finding
solution
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a solution
the solution
to your question. What about replacement real communication to online chatting? One wise person said” To get closer to the person - you need to talk with him face to face at least once.” And I just have no argue with
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these words
this word
. On the whole,
main goal
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the main goal
of creating social networks was help people keeping in touch and do it very fast, easy and cheap. Of course, it’s
incredible alternative
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an incredible alternative
to sending letters like
last
century. But as a consequence of the inviting
this
brilliant
things
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thing
, humanity began to prefer
use
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using
online life everywhere. Obviously communicate with others as a regular account in SN easier, you can
tell
express in words
say
anything you want, violating the privacy of others and remaining unpunished. Doesn’t it sound
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tempting
?
Finally
, all I want say is that SN conquered the world and what it will lead to we will be able to know only after seeing the result. But please pay attention to your
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
in IT and try to live your life offline.
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