You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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Nowadays, a plethora of people suffering from different energy ailments due to the unhealthy lifestyle. In the modern era, Only the person who has good wealth can afford the medicine because of its high cost. To, cope up with

this

problem every nation should have free health centres and expensive medical treatment

also

available there. In

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essay, I agree with the statement and discussed my opinion. In the global era, where the majority of folks suffering from numerous energy problems, need proper strength service so that they can treat themselves. So, for

this

authority should provide free health services to their citizens to lead a better life. I want to share an experience of my neighbour who is suffering from cancer and don't have enough budget for the treatment, but a free cancer hospital, which was run by the government of the Delhi admitted him and treat him with all the latest medical remedy in a very less budget. It is a good concept if all the nations provide free well-being care services to their people so that they can lead a happy and healthy life because In today's world doctors charged high fees and is not possible for everybody to pay. These services really helpful to them. To conclude, a plethora of people suffering from energy issues due to unhealthy lifestyle and environmental factors and it's very difficult for a man who don't even get a two time meal to eat, go for a treatment so, free health centres are the best options for every slot of folks in the society.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

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5 paragraphs

263 words

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Some people think that children should start school at a very early age, but others believe that they should not go to school until they are older.

Some people believe that children should be allowed to go out for outdoor activities. While others believe that children should stay at home most of the time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teacher in the classroom.

Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.