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The bar charts below show the number of hours each teacher spent teaching in different schools in four different countries in 2001

The bar charts below show the number of hours each teacher spent teaching in different schools in four different countries in 2001
#bar #show #hours #teacher #schools #four #countries
The bar chart
illustrate
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illustrates
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 the number of
hours
of
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every teacher spent teaching in primary ,lower Secondary and upper Secondary
schools
 in
Japan
,
Spain
, Iceland and
USA
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the USA
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 in 2001.
Overall
 it can be clearly seen that teachers in every country spend more
hours
to
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apply
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teaching in upper secondary
schools
,
while
 in other
schools
 teaching
hours
approximately
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 the same . Look at the primary
school
 in
Japan
 and
Spain
, the
hours
 of teaching in
Japan
 was 600
hours
while
 in
Spain
 was about 700
hours
. Lower Secondary
school
 in both countries was under 800
hours
 . And the figure
of
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for
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 Upper Secondary
school
 in
Japan
 was 700
hours
while
 in
Spain
 the figure was higher to 200
hours
 .
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 to the
next
countrie
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country
, primary and Lower Secondary
schools
 in Iceland were approximately the same and were 600
hours
.
Meanwhile
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 in
USA
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the USA
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 , primary
school
 was about 800
hours
 and in Lower Secondary
school
 was 1000
hours
. And teaching
hours
 in the Upper secondary
school
 in Iceland was 900 ,
while
 in
USA
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the USA
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 was superior to 300
hours
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, schools, japan, spain, school with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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