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The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
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The line chart compares the
rate
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 of the
population
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aging
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 percentage for three countries in the surveyed period of 100
years
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, from 1940 to 2040. In general, the
rate
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 of people increased in countries between 1940 and 2040. Japan is expected to witness the most dramatic change in
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population
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aging
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rate
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. In 1940, around 9% of Americans were 65
years
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 of age and older, compared with roughly 7% of Swedes and 5% of Japanese. 50
years
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 later, the
rate
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 of the
population
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aging
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ageing
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 in
American
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America
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 and Swedes
were
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 a gradual increase, just
below15
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below 15
% in 1990.
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, numbers for Japan remained stable well under 5% until the early 2000s. Looking
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 future, an ever-increasing
number of
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oldster
rate
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 is predicted for Japan, with a jump of over 15% in just 10
years
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 from 2030 to 2040. Until 2040, they think about 27% of the Japanese
population
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 will be aged 65 and over,
while
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 the numbers for Sweden and
the
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American
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America
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 will
be fall
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 slightly,
at
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 25% and 22% respectively.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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