Some people say that the education system is the only critical factor in the development of a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Education is considered as a key factor in the growth of any
nation
by many individuals.I
,
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,
firmly, agree with
this
belief and
forythcoming
at ease in talking to others
forthcoming
paragraphs will support my
view point
a mental position from which things are viewed
viewpoint
.
literate
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Literate
population is the pillar of any developed
nation
.
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.
More the literacy rate means more proficient work force and
hence
, a better production
,
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,
which ultimately leads to a strong economy.
For example
, if a state has an adequate amount of professionals
then
obiously
unmistakably ('plain' is often used informally for 'plainly')
obviously
will have good industry as compared to the one who has not enough skilled persons.
Thus
, it can be seen clearly that an education plays a vital role in a country's economy. The other major impact of education is on society
.
Accept space
.
Educated people may
built
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build
a society free from
strotypes
a conventional or formulaic conception or image
stereotypes
and other bad elements
such
as: drugs, crime and many more as they are aware about every
aspest
a distinct feature or element in a problem
aspect
of life and raise good standards of living which
,
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,
in turn, develop a modal society and
hence
, take part in
devlopment
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the development
development
developments
of a
nation
by attracting more tourists and industry. In conclusion, an education system of a country reflects its image
world wide
involving the entire earth; not limited or provincial in scope
worldwide
and gives a skilled labour which enhance
industry
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the industry
, and ultimately the economy of a
nation
.
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