The graph shows the export of thousand of cars in Uzbekistan between 2014 and 2019.

The graph shows the export of thousand of cars in Uzbekistan between 2014 and 2019.
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A glance at the line graph provided reveals data for the
export
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of five cars over the years from 2014 to 2019 in Uzbekistan. From the information supplied it is evident that Matiz was a car exported in the hugest number at the beginning of the year,
while
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Spark was the least. Yet, by the end of the year, as the
export
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of the former had declined, the latter had gradually increased and surpassed
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them
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. In 2014, the largest exported car was Matiz with
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a
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proportion of 80
thousand
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followed by Damas and Lacette which accounted for about 70
thousand
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and 60
thousand
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, respectively. In comparison, Spark and Cobalt formed the lowest share in terms of
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export
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with approximately 10
thousand
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. By 2019,
however
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, the number of Matiz and Lacette exported had steadily decreased to 40
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,
whereas
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the
export
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of Spark had gone up and reached
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nearly 60
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.
Also
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note worthy
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noteworthy
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is the fact that, in 2017,
although
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Damas
export
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experienced a sharp rise of 30
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,
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they
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dropped over 60
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and remained the same for the rest of the year,
while
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the figure for Cobalt fluctuated between about 10
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and 30
thousand
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over the 5 years.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words export, thousand with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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