Smacking children is the best form of discipline. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There are different methods to teach

children

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discipline. Some

parents

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believe that spanking is the best way to develop

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children

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behaviour.

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why physical punishments are absolutely preposterous. There are

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number of

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following physical punishments for teaching their

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disciplne

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discipline

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and they will be

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the

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slapping when they think about doing

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beat their

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when they notice that

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are wasting water

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unnecessarily

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. Surveys

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that in many families,

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punishments

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believe that

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punishing

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a child physically is not the best method to teach him or her discipline in their life. Because they feel that punishing

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means of physical activities can cause

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to become

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stubborn

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to become

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from

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affect them mentally. So

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them is the best method. Recent surveys done in

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that many

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why some

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are doing physical

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punishments

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their

children

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and its consequences. In my

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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225 words

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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