Write a letter to complain about a situation in which some adolescents let their dogs run widely causing dangers. You should write atleast 150 words.

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I am

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dweller of Galway Street and writing

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missive to seek your assistance with the issue which I witnessed yesterday while passing by

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apply

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Princess street, as a conscientious citizen. Yesterday evening, I was having a meeting with my friend near

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princess street. While I was crossing the road, I observed a situation that happened over there.

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, it was calm and peaceful at the place, people of every age were strolling there, the road was

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having a

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merge

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traffic. But suddenly, some adolescents released their dogs on the way and were running, jumping and laughing loudly behind them. Everybody was scared and stuck at the moment. A woman survived from knocking down because the driver safely braked his car. It was a mortally serious incident. So, as a law enforcement officer, would you depute at least a couple of constables in the area for

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incidents not to reoccur. Yours faithfully, Gagandeep

Thu Apr 09 2020

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

157 words

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Write a letter to complain about a situation in which some adolescents let their dogs run widely causing dangers. You should write atleast 150 words.

The Greeting

You have a friend who lives abroad. You have decided to apply for a course at one of the colleges in his city. Write to your friend explaining Tell them about the college and the course and why you want to do it. Ask for their help to find accommodation if you get admission to the course.

some people think that history has little or nothing to offer us, while others bekive that history help us undertand present. discuss both views and give ypur oppinion

Some people say that schools should concentrate on teaching students academic subjects that will be useful for their future careers. Other say that subjects such as music and sports are also necessary. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people thick that the government should be responsible for improving public health. Others, however, believe that everyone should take part in this issue.

Students should choose a university major that prepares them for high-paying careers. To what extent do you agree with this statement?