You have organized to go on holiday with your friend. However, you must change your plans. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: 1. Tell them how much you are looking forward to the holiday. 2. Explain why you must change your plans. 3. Suggest alternative arrangements.

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Dear Sagar, How are you? I hope you're doing good. I'm writing

this

letter to let you know about my excitement about the visit to the camping trip

weekend. I've planned our visit to the site. Unfortunately, we have to change our schedule because of my medical emergency. Let me explain my situation in more detail. The day before yesterday we went to the birthday party of my colleague's daughter. The

morning I was having pain in my stomach and feeling weak. I went to the hospital and got the information that I've come across the food poisoning effect and require full rest at home. Perhaps due to my medical condition could we plan our trip to the

weekend? I've already prepared all the arrangements and spoke with a travel agent. He would provide us

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same rooms and the same route to the site. So that there will be no hustle. I'm extremely sorry for the inconvenience and I look forward to hearing from you. Best wishes Abhishek Soni

Thu Apr 09 2020

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

175 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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