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The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

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In
this
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 age of technology / globalization, the
internet
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 has proved to be a boon for the
society
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. As time passes / with the passage of time the knowledge provided by
this
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 innovation has made us dependent on it;
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, the
society
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 can retrograde if
this
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 web facility is overused. To commence with, the net plays a promising role in the development of the
society
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. It acts as a reliable source of
information
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 for any age group. Learners irrespective of their ages can surf the
internet
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 and widen the horizons of their mind by imbibing knowledge.
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, the
internet
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 plays an imperative role in the dissemination of knowledge.
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, young children can become innovators by grasping ideas from the
internet
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.
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, older people can get their hands on new technologies
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 as mobile phones using the
internet
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. Undoubtedly, the web does prove to be extremely beneficial.
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, increased access does bring with it negative aspects which are irrefutable. It can prove
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to be
 a bane for the
society
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 as personal and confidential
information
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 has become readily available making it vulnerable to exploitation. People provide their particulars knowingly or unknowingly and
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 get trapped by exploiters. Another concern is the reliability of
information
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. Much of the
information
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 on the
internet
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 is user generated and as
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 there is no easy way to check its veracity. To conclude, the World Wide Web has magnificently increased our access to
information
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.
Nevertheless
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, there are significant concerns about the reliability of
this
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information
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.

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