Children are now less active in their free time than in the past. Therefore, sports lessons must be compulsory in schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In today’s world,

children

are inactive and less energetic than they used to be in the past. It is believed that schools need to have some

sports

classes for the youth. From my perspective, I totally agree with the statement and in

this

essay, I will give reasons.

Firstly

, physical activity improves

children

’s mental well-being. Some

children

are obese because of too little

exercises

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, and it’s not good for their health.

Therefore

,

sports

lessons will make them do many activities to

sweating

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and get fit. Not only

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obese

children

,

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but

also

underweight ones need to more exercise to be healthier.

For instance

, my nephew used to be skinny, so my family decided to send him

into

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a basketball class. Surprising that he is now in good condition and

also

gains

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muscles.

Additionally

,

sports

help

children

learn discipline and

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with others as a team.

Sport

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is the best way that

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your kids some simple discipline like getting to practice on time, or doing the right techniques and rules in order not to be punished. Whenever

children

join in their favourite sport, they will be more active and confident to show their skills and learn from

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others.

Moreover

, teamwork helps

children

to be more united,

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with team members to get scores. It is obviously seen that our kids will get more friends from

sports

classes. That’s the reason why they become happier and more energetic.

To sum up

, I believe that

sports

lessons must be obligatory in schools because of their benefits.

However

, there must be a variety of

sports

for

children

to choose their desired one, which

make

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them joyfully take part in, not

to

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axetily

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acetic

.