The chart below shows the annual pay (thousands of US dollars) for doctors and other workers in seven countries in 2004

The chart below shows the annual pay (thousands of US dollars) for doctors and other workers in seven countries in 2004
The bar chart compares seven different nations in terms of yearly
salary
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salaries
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for their
doctors
and other
workers
in the
year
2004.
Overall
, the annual earnings of
doctors
were higher than other
workers
of
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all countries.
In addition
, the United States paid the highest
the
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amount
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number
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of
dollars
for their
doctors
and
workers
compared to other countries. By 2004, US
doctors
earned 120 thousand
dollars
a
year
, double that of
doctors
in Italy,
Czech
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the Czech
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Republic and Germany. France and Switzerland paid the same annual wages for
doctors
, at about 70000
dollars
.
While
the yearly earnings of
doctors
in Finland were the lowest, at around 50000
dollars
. In the same
year
, concerning annual pay for other
workers
, the US took the top position again at around 43 thousand
dollars
, followed by Switzerland and France with approximately 40 and 35 thousand
dollars
respectively. Interestingly,
workers
in Italy,
Czech
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Republic and Germany received the same amount of salary, at precise 20 000
dollars
per
year
.
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