Some people say that the universities must only accept student with high mark. While others believe that universities must accept students of all ages regardless of their previous grades. Discuss both views.
There are those who believe that only students with excellent grades ought to be granted acceptance into tertiary institutes while others think they must offer an opportunity to pupils no matter what their age, equally without considering their marks. In
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On one side of the argument, there are people who argue the benefits of accepting only students with high grade outweigh its disadvantages. The main reason for believing Linking Words
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is most students who have high marks are likely to respect professors very much and study exceptionally hard.
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opinion because sometimes students with a great potential could not focus on study because they had to spend their time making a living and Linking Words
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point is that the conventional system is not perfect when it comes to evaluating talented students. A particularly good example here is that a student with a great scientific mind, who is not a native English speaker, might not be accepted because they could not pass an arduous exam like IELTS.
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