Topic: Children’s education is expensive. In some countries, the government pays some of or all the costs. Do the advantages out weight its disadvantages?

The cost of sending offsprings to school is quite exorbitant. The government in a number of Nations has resorted to funding a portion of it and in some cases the entire fees.
This
essay will discuss why the advantages in terms of reduced pressure on the parents and improved education for these children far outweighs the disadvantages. Most parents are finding it increasing difficult to afford the expensive fees for the education of their wards and
this
puts a lot of pressure on them, most especially if they have more than one or two children to cater for, on the one hand, the intervention of state in
this
matter serves as a great relief because it reduces the stress felt in
this
regard,
on the other hand
if the government of a Nation leaves the total funding in the hands of the sponsors,
this
could put them under a lot of stress and impact their health.
For instance
, in Nigeria, the ministry hardly assists in its citizens in paying for the school fees of their wards leading to a strain on their finances and inadvertently having a negative effect on their well being. When
authority
Suggestion
the authority
of Nations makes education of its citizens a priority and decide to pay all or part of the fees of the young people in the country
,
Accept space
,
this
will lead to an improvement in the training because the parents can supplement the funding given, in part,
this
will
then
enable the children
attend
Suggestion
to attend
better schools than they will ordinarily have gone if their training had to be solely funded by their parents.
For example
, in the Niger Delta areas of Nigeria, the state governments give out scholarships to students from that part of the country to study abroad,
this
leads to their wards getting a top notch training in their program of choice. To Conclude, the advantages of the state of a number of countries funding some or the entire study of some of its younger population
as a result
of
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
exorbitance
Suggestion
exorbitant
, far surpasses its pitfalls because at the end of the day the pressure of high cost is cushioned from the parents and there is a greater opportunity for an improved schooling.

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