The chart below gives information Southland’s main exports in 2000, *20.., and future projections for 2025. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar graph depicts Suthland’s main exports for two years, 2000 and 2020,

as well as

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forecasted values for 2025.

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, international tourism was the most popular main outsell in the first reported year for the land and will keep the leading role in 2025 with exactly 10

billion

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pounds

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. Dairy products which held the

second

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position in the

export’s

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list of Southland in 2000 will

also

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remain as demanded as they were.

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, their gradual raise from 7

billion

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pounds

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to almost 10

billion

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pounds

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in 2019 will be stopped with a decline to nearly 9.5

billion

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pounds

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in 2025.

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, the total growth for

this

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export position will be practically 30

percent

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per cent

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. Meanwhile, meat products show

gradual

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a gradual

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downturn through the years from 6

billion

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pounds

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to 5

billion

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pounds

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, their position among all three main export goods is keeping the

last

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for all two reported and one predicted date.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words billion, pounds with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "gradual" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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3 paragraphs

153 words

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