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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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Nowadays peoples try to learn many languages. Someone learns to have a rich vocabulary, others live or study in a foreign
country
. On the one hand, learning languages improve our speech and our horizon. Because when we learn
language
 of one
country
, we get to know their culture and their habits.
For example
, I learn English and Spanish for two years, and I know everything about their
country
 and their people. In Spain since ancient time preserved to sing Spanish songs with a guitar and wear their hat which is called "Sombrero". When I learnt English I find out about their English full breakfast which is so delicious and dense.
This
 breakfast includes eggs, bacon, sausages, pudding, baked beans, tomatoes, mushrooms and a beverage
such
 as coffee or tea.
On the other hand
, learning languages help to succeed our dream. Many people learn languages to pass exam and to study abroad. Older people want to learn languages to work in a foreign
country
.
For example
, in our time we have many offers from many countries, which is about study or work. And the key of their offer is to pass exams on their
language
.
Besides
 that learning
language
 helps to converse with other people who are not native speaker of your
country
. In my opinion, learning languages is much profitably, because when you know
lan
guage yo
Suggestion
the language
a language
u can work like an interpreter, and you have an opportunity to have friends in the other countries. To sum up, all of
this
 being said, I believe that learning a different
language
 should be not only for physical needs, like money, but
also
 our moral needs, because never before had
such
 a big thirst for knowledge been displayed.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multilingual
  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
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