After graduating from high school , some young people decide to start working right away instead of going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this?

It is generally accepted that Individuals can decide their own career path after they graduate from high schools. It is a source of much to debate that whether it is mandatory to go to
university
or get a job
right
after graduation. There are both advantages and disadvantages about
this
issues
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issue
. One of the drawbacks would be lack of
knowledge
of high level education or professional backgrounds. On the other side, It is beneficial for people who cannot afford the
university
tuition fees.
To begin
with, realistically, it is fact that it is hard to find
job
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jobs
without
bachelor's degree
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a bachelor's degree
in modern society due to
high level
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high levels
the high level
of competitions. It is hard for high
school
graduates to compete with
large number
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a large number
the large number
of
university
graduates when they look for jobs and of course, most of the middle class to big companies would hire someone who has more
knowledge
about their jobs in order to make profits.
University
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The university
provides expanded
knowledge
of the program to students to enable them to develop
profetional
engaged in a profession or engaging in as a profession or means of livelihood
professional
professionally
knowledge
.
Therefore
, someone graduated from
university
has more
knowledge
compared to high
school
graduates.
This
is one of the most
realistical
in a realistic manner
realistically
realistic
disadvantage
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disadvantages
of starting work
right
after high
school
graduation.
On the other hand
,
large number
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large numbers
a large number
of humans face financial difficulties of affording
universitiy
the body of faculty and students at a university
university
tuition fees due to
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
high cost. Parents often struggle to pay their children's
university
tution
a fee paid for instruction (especially for higher education)
tuition
fees and they sometimes give up going to
university
and get a job
right
after
grauation
the successful completion of a program of study
graduation
from high
school
. Financial issues would be one of the biggest factor not going to
university
.
However
, humans can maintain their daily livings if they earn income by themselves. In
additon
a component that is added to something to improve it
addition
to
this
, parents do not need to worry about paying expensive
university
tuition fees. It is arguable whether individuals go to
university
or work
right
after high schools. One of the disadvantage would be lack of expanding their
profesional
engaged in a profession or engaging in as a profession or means of livelihood
professional
knowledge
and it is beneficial to someone really have to earn money for surviving by themselves. As for me, I feel that it
is personal decision
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is a personal decision
making problem
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making, problem
about their own lives and career.

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