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It is inevitable that as technology advances, traditional cultures will be lost. It seems that we cannot have these two things together. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

#technology #advances #cultures #two
In
this
 modern epoch
technology
 revolutionized each and every sector. Due to which traditional cultures are getting vanished every year. So, it has become
bone
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a bone
the bone
 of contention that with the technological advancement, traditional
culture
 should be preserved or not. I will enunciate these views in
subsequent paragraph
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a subsequent paragraph
the subsequent paragraph
subsequent paragraphs
 along with my opinion. To commence with my view, it’s a law of nature that things are changing every day. So, change is
inevitable it
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inevitable, it
 cannot be stopped by anyone.
Now a days
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Nowadays
, every country is in the race of developing innovative
technology
 due to which traditional cultures were disappearing. So, it is good to follow modern
culture
 and using
advance
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advanced
technology
instead
 of following old outdated
culture
. Because of technological advancement it
become
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becomes
 possible to reach into space and explore numerous planets. Using innovative equipment, one could find the solution of every problem, in today’s
era it
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era, it
 plays an important role in
humans’
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human
 life. It’s not possible
two
in the direction of
to
 have both together.
Further
 elaborating my views, by using
advance
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advanced
technology we
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technology, we
 can easily communicate with each other and
also
 understand different
cultures even
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cultures, even
 though we are sitting at
long distance
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a long distance
.
On the other hand
, if we try to save traditional
culture
 we cannot because of
generation gap
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the generation gap
 as modern people adapt themselves according to modern
technology
 they like to use
advance
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advanced
technology
 for their leisure activities and studies. To
recapitulate I
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recapitulate, I
 concede that using innovative
technology
 is more fruitful for the modern age generation. Wasting time to preserve old traditional
culture
 is useless. If we try to preserve it now our future generation will perish it.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inevitable
  • advancement
  • globalization
  • dilutes
  • traditional cultures
  • social media
  • blending of cultures
  • preservation
  • platforms
  • adaptability
  • technological adaptations
  • uphold
  • consequence
  • integrate
  • cultural frameworks
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