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Some people argue that technological interventions such as mobile phones are making people socially less interactive. Do you agree or disagree?

#people #interventions #phones
Mobile phones
are
Suggestion
were
 the
one
 of the biggest technological revolutions in the 20th century. They completely changed the way we communicate. It is a smart
phone
 era
phone
 era now, which gives browse anything from anywhere in the world with internet. After communication, entertainment comes up. Today's entertainment world is completely laid on smart phones. Some people suggest, smart phones killing social interaction. There is a bitter truth in it. There is nothing that smart phones can't do these days. You can watch movies, shows, make video calls, play video games, online shopping what not. These options can make you addicted to smart phones. There are a lot of advantages with them, the world became smaller. No need to run anywhere to make a
phone
 call, you are just
one
 button away to see your family and friends, no need to drive to shops for shopping, with
one
 click you can purchase any item and it will be delivered to your door step. These are the things may sound like fantasy 20 years back, but now all those are possible, mobile phones made them possible.
However
, there are, some pitfalls that can easily overwhelm the benefits of the mobile
phone
. Addiction to them is the main complaint. In fact, there are a lot side effects like damaging ecosystem, but addiction to mobile phones is
one
 of the biggest issues facing by
this
 generation. It is not only killing
time
, but
also
 making a social
damage
. People who always glued to smart phones, they spend less
time
 with people and with their family.
This
 causes a very big
damage
 to society because it will affect relations which are very crucial to humans. It
also
 causes physical
damage
 to collar bone, which is really hard to heal. Effecting education and working efficiency are another
damage
 by addiction. To avoid
this
,
one
 must reduce
time
Suggestion
the time
 they are spending on mobile phones, they must avoid phones when they are spending
time
 with family. Dedicating limited
time
 to
phone
 usage will be helpful, try to participate in some social events will our relations with everyone. To conclude, excessive usage of phones causes colossal
damage
 to our social relations. To avoid that, we must reduce the usage of it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • technological interventions
  • socially less interactive
  • face-to-face interactions
  • meaningful relationships
  • illusion of connectivity
  • superficial interactions
  • genuine social engagement
  • dependency
  • social skills
  • empathy
  • understanding
  • geographically separated
  • social network
  • immediate physical boundaries
  • organizing social events
  • nuanced
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