Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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days our life
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days in our life
changes through the rapid development of technology and the internet. Our modern life lets a large number of people depend on the internet and online buying in many aspects of their lifestyle.
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, some people don't prefer to buy their needs on the internet for a lot of reasons.
This
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essay will discuss both sides and will present my conclusion. On the one hand, some people not
favored
preferred above all others and treated with partiality
favoured
buying online because of its disadvantages.
Firstly
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, as all of us Know, buying online is not the same as traditional buying. We cannot see the real size, material, kind and the details of the
product
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because the picture is not as the reality. That’s why many people chucked when they see the
product
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after delivered.
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,
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several companies don't present the true specifications of the
product
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in the picture, they don't allow them to retrieve or replace it.
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, some
product
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's delivery price is higher than the
product
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price itself.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
, people prefer to buy it by themselves
instead
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of paying more for delivery.
On the other hand
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, now a
day the majority of
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day, the majority of
people prefer to
buying
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buy
online when they realize the great benefits of it.
there
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There
is no doubt that online buying makes life much easier. It preserves people's time and
effort especially
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effort, especially
for those who have a lot of
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work
and less time or working woman that needs to meet the needs of her children.
online
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Online
buying creates a great chance for small and medium businesses to grow and spread. Sometimes it's considered as a base income of some dealers.
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, online buying allows people to buy products from anywhere in the world at any time. In conclusion, after careful analysis of both point views. I believe that online buying will Overwhelm the world and will be the approved way of buying because of its widespread and its major benefits.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • time-saving
  • wide selection
  • competitive prices
  • discounts
  • accessibility
  • global marketplace
  • availability
  • fraud
  • scams
  • lack of
  • physical interaction
  • personal experience
  • impersonal
  • customer service
  • delays
  • delivery
  • return process
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