The charts summarise the weight measurements of people living in Charlestown in 1955 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1
The chart illustrates the classification of reduced by 10
weight
measurements of Charlestown during the years 1995 to 2015. The data are classified into age
groups of 20 to 29, 30 to 39, 50 to 59 and 60 to 69 and into weight
range
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ranges
such
as underweight, ideal, overweight and obese.
Overall
, In 1995, the population
was healthy with all age
groups consisting of more than 50% of people
with an ideal weight
. In 2015 however
, only people
within the age
group of 20 to 29 had an ideal weight
.
In 1995, more than 70% of the population
aged 20 to 29 were ideal. This
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was
percent
and 60% of the Change the spelling
per cent
people
of
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in
age
group 30 to 39 had an ideal weight
, whereas
the rest 40% was equally distributed between the overweight and underweight categories. The older population
consisted of the most underweight people
compared to the rest of the age
groups accounting for 40%.
In 2015, three-quarters of the young people
are ideal, and about 60% of the older population
are overweight. There is a gradual decrease of
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in
people
with an ideal weight
until the age
of 60 were
about 60% are obese, more than 20% are overweight and only 5% are ideal.Correct your spelling
where
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