Many people these days have computer,laptop and telephone at their home for work .Do you think working from home has more advantage or disadvantage?

In
this
era technology has
grownso
Suggestion
grown so
far people have online jobs which they can attend by sitting at home.These jobs are performed by
such
electronic gadgets like laptops or mobile phones.Working from
homs
where you live at a particular time
home
has more benefits as compared to going work at offices which
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
will
disscuss
to consider or examine in speech or writing
discuss
in
upcoming paragraphs
Suggestion
the upcoming paragraphs
.
Firstly
, most of the people prefer to do their jobs from home as they can spend quality time with their family
,
Accept space
,
even keep check on their children.They can pay attention towards their child's academics which most probably parents who go for jobs cannot keep
eye
Suggestion
an eye
on them as they are only dependent on
tutuions
a fee paid for instruction (especially for higher education)
tuition
, as
this
would
br
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
be
main reason
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the main reason
for a parent
doing
the act that results in something coming to be
making
job online
on
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for
laptops or computers and they would keep
proper check
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a proper check
on their
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
and their study.
online
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Online
jobs
also
help in improving family bond
,
Accept space
,
physically going
for
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to
work in companies for 8 to 9 hours does not give them time to spend with their family and
some how
in some unspecified way or manner; or by some unspecified means
somehow
responsible for
lost
a large number or amount
lots
of love between their family.So doing
such
jobs which are online will give them a positive
effects
Suggestion
effect
on their work as well as family. In the end, working from home is helpful for workers as they can spend their time in hectic
sechdule
plan for an activity or event
schedules
.
Accept space
.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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